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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
RESURRECTED ONCE AGAIN

RESURRECTED ONCE AGAIN

A Poem by Latifa

the backs of the humble spirits are arching
and smokes of the vexatious flares are winding
to stifle and strangle the nectar soliloquy
hindering the swollen soul to mend
oh how could it mend!
while it's dining the sour and the bland 
find me the seraphic musk 
I want to soak my pallid skin in it
 to resurrect my waning  inner
and revive my twinging body from the dead

© 2014 Latifa


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Didn't quite get the meaning behind this or may have a different interpretation of your work with the real story behind it but that's the beauty of poetry. One poem can have various interpretation.
I love the wording and the imagery of this poem. Love the flow and rhythm. Great piece Latifa!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Latifa

9 Years Ago

thank you for the review :)
Mirra

9 Years Ago

Your welcome :-)
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This piece is so vibrant and full of life. The word choice is great, as is the imagery. I should probably go look up some of these words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you for such uplifting review
Love your word choice and imagery. You did a wonderful job! :)
-QuanaWana

Posted 10 Years Ago


"to stifle and strangle the nectar soliloquy" this is outstanding poetic thought. BRAVO!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you for the review
Strong statements create visions and thoughts. The short statements made me want to know more. Last lines left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Strong statements create visions and thoughts. The short statements made me want to know more. Last lines left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


this a fine poet who is improving all the time, this is very good..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you deeply for your encouraging review
WOW! Amazingly clear imagery that you painted here. Brilliant work. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you for the review my new friend :)....
As always a brilliance work.... Great, very nice to read you every often...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you for the review Ssadd
Latifa, for a 21 year old you speak with a tongue of someone who is well seasoned. You are a master of words my dear!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you for the encouraging review Christian

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Added on July 3, 2014
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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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