REBIRTH

REBIRTH

A Poem by Latifa

 scourging atrophy have pervaded my soul
and life is eroding
I imbibe the source
 of the crystalline waters
to savor the truth
I fondle with clay
to find my beginnings
  Resuscitated by sweet breaths of clemency
I cripple my way back to rebirth
but I must choose wisely
for the pearl of the renascence
is in disguise
 and the wobbling bridges wont hold much longer

© 2014 Latifa


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the wobbling bridges won't hold much longer. Love that line.

Posted 6 Years Ago


its beautiful... rebirth in itself is a question.. whether we really want it or not and what we want in it.. sufferings of this life make us weak and we find it hard to digest the reality.. beautifully written with the use of nice words.. great work Latifa..and i really liked your name too.. thanks for sharing :)

Raj

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the kind review raj 24
Oh, you definitely must choose nicely.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Absolutely stunning piece of poetry. Well written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for reviewing my humble piece
Terrific writing Latifa. Your skill level, vocabulary and ideation are remarkable. Is Algeria culture oppressive? I ask because your writing echoes a mirror on your world.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alfred Kukitz

6 Years Ago

For a 22 year old you are way ahead of your time. Perhaps you should endeavor into novels about you.. read more
Latifa

6 Years Ago

yeah, that's actually my ultimate goal concerning writing but I'm still a very much a beginner in no.. read more
Alfred Kukitz

6 Years Ago

I can hardly wait!
This is like a breath of fresh air, so beautifully inked. Poetry is all this! A finely penned poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for your kind review
Wonderful imagery and message - potent as ever love...blossoming isn't easy and must be paid attention to, as you do here, excellent! x

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review darlin
not only a fine vocabularly, but a clever layout that adds to it..well done !

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review Leslie
Rebirth. A needed thing for the all of us.
"I fondle with clay
to find my beginnings
Resuscitated by sweet breaths of clemency
I cripple my way back to rebirth"
I like the above lines. Create visions and thoughts by the strong statements. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for reviewing
Your rebirth is chosen wisely as the words of this wonderful poem. We cross the bridge when we are ready and willing. Excellent dear poet...:)..........

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you Sami aidakom mobarak
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You too. You are welcome...:)................

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Added on July 27, 2014
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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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