Envy

Envy

A Poem by Latifa
"

my very first senryu

"

Gritted teeth of ire,
she sips  her envy basking,
sickened by laughter.

© 2014 Latifa


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Your words amaze me.. these three lines, and yet a whole world of life here. One can feel the suffering, the aching music of the laughing. So powerful. Thankful you are back with us.

Posted 1 Year Ago


a perfect description of a girl in certain situation use few words but they reflect so much details, emotion and visuality thank you for sharing
amazing job Latifa i loved it

Posted 2 Years Ago


A standing ovation. Glad to see you back.

Posted 3 Years Ago


By Jove, I think she's got it....It takes a lot of skill to say so very much in so few words 10/10

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you for the review Neville.
Very intriguing Latifa - I see a scarlet woman intent on driving a wedge between two lovers who are laughing which makes her so jealous and determined to have her own wicked brand of fun lol
I liked this - your first senryu - it read smoothly (though Im not very experienced with this form of late).
Great experimentation my friend
:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you for the review :)
I never expected to see something such as envy brought out in just three lines.
Masterful writing.
Lovely piece.

Thank you for sharing.
-Angad

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you so much for the uplifting review
So much said of the way envy poisons the heart and soul of us… yet, in so very few words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow. That first line is absolute perfection and the poem follows suit. Lovely! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Strong words that bring out the title well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Envy's a mo fo, That's for sure.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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