Envy

Envy

A Poem by Latifa
"

my very first senryu

"

Gritted teeth of ire,
she sips  her envy basking,
sickened by laughter.

© 2014 Latifa


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This is a very nicely written piece

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cut to the bone good. You can feel the tension! Nice work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Emotive work and well written piece

Posted 5 Years Ago


This poem gave me a chill. There was something frightening beneath the surface.
Masterful use of emotion.

Posted 5 Years Ago


An excellent senryu for its depth of understanding and expression. I do think you need a comma between envy and basking. Otherwise loved it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


this grasped at my attention and my mind..I love it!

Posted 5 Years Ago


This was captivating, which is a lot to accomplish in a short poem. Great job girl!
-QuanaWana

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you for the review
It kicked my gut... would that be enough?

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you for the review
Perfectly written , kept to the syllable count..an accomplished poem !

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you for the review
sounds like she wants to get even

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on August 21, 2014
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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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