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Blazing heat of summer

Blazing heat of summer

A Poem by Latifa
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yeah, it's Haiku

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stabbing rays of heat
bruise the green grass to yellow,
oh poor, sweating grass.

© 2014 Latifa


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wow.. so true, so true...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for all the reviews dear friend.
Another great haiku. :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


The summer heat can be a beating at that:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


"stabbing rays of heat
bruise the green grass to yellow,
oh poor, sweating grass."


Posted 6 Years Ago


A marvelous Haiku. Bravo.......................

Posted 6 Years Ago


metaphors where would we be without them
great write

Posted 6 Years Ago


ha beautiful write Latifa, good way to describe the sun and its effect on nature...great ink dear writer,and dear neighbour...haha i'm Moroccan so.. lol
anywas , write some more :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

glad to meet you neighbor, thank you for the review
Agree with the excellent review of Christopher. I do though see too the strict rules of classical Japanese poetry not as prescriptive, as the form or structure of Japanese is so unique as not to be applicable to other languages. I often read reviews packed full of comments about iambs and trochees and meter. I tend these days to be pragmatic ; if it works, it`s fine, and I think this too is a good poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


hahah taking a shot at Haiku. nice try, petit and nice

Posted 6 Years Ago


I will agree with Christopher Robin, and you have penned a good Haiku, better than I had, when I started out on them.
Nice work.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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