nightly nights

nightly nights

A Poem by Latifa
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it's been a long while since i've writen anything, so this one is after a long period of writers block.

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Nightly,nightly nights
come neighing,
they sense my urge for shades
to cool off the itching flames.

nightly, nightly nights
throw their blinking cape
at my crouching spine of worry,
I lay under to pant,
I lay under to solace,
then I fondle with the stars
to shed the aweless
torment and renew the promise
to abolish all that is malice.

© 2014 Latifa


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GREAT FLOW OF WORDS AND A NIGHT TO REMEMBER AND A PROMISE TO RESOLVE EVERYTHING TOMORROW.. ENJOYED READING IT N YOU KEEP WRITING BECAUSE WE ALL ARE WAITING :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Latifa

2 Years Ago

thank you for stopping by, it has been a while indeed
I love the use of assonance! It really gave the poem a greater depth to it. You are very talented, Latifa! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you for the review Michael :) God bless ya
I liked the flow of thoughts. You create places and thoughts for the reader with the strong description. I liked the ending. To abolish all that is malice. Would be a good place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you my friend for stopping by, I appreciate it much.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
very beautiful...nice write

Posted 5 Years Ago


That's some real beautiful imagery used to describe your deepest thoughts. The choice of words are sensually elegant quite contrary to the message it delivers.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like the description to this...great job! 😊

Posted 5 Years Ago


This poem had a very unique flow to it but it works very well. Nice job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Amazing poetry, great vocabulary and flow to it :)

Well done :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you for the review :)
Beautiful write Latifa! I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

-CW

Posted 5 Years Ago


Its a beautiful night depicted my eloquent words drenched in dreams.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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