Ain't no Freedom

pray for me my fellow writers, this is a crucial time of my life.

fractured, fragile, flying
ain't no more flying
the feathers are soaked in water
ain't no more flying

blunt,  brute ,blades of ego
cuts the wings and soak the feather in water
blunt,brute, blades of the old man's ego
gash the young bird's wings with ego
ain't no more flying

hell, ain't no freedom!
hell, ain't no living!
slavery has worn the cloak of ego
to hang the bird's freedom

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and powerful poetry my Poet friend.
"hell, ain't no freedom!
hell, ain't no living!
slavery have wear the cloak of ego
to hang the bird's freedom"
I hope things are better. No-one want to be locked-in and controlled. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Baby Ricochet]

It's all like cryptic and s**t. Cool

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Jon Roggie]

You gave me words to contemplate. Great write.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Sami Khalil]

I missed your talent and writings. I know you have a lot of work at school. Glad to see you expressing again...Bravo...................

[wordman]

a sad write latifa and it seems to e worse

[Latifa]

it is, thank you for stopping by

[wordman]

my pleasure