April mood swings

April mood swings

A Poem by Latifa
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a consised poem that I had in mind.

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April mood swings are paralleled  to mine,
its heat sears the greenish of lands
like doubts sears my desires;
yet its rain strokes the land to revive
like my faith strokes my seared desires

© 2015 Latifa


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.........beautiful poem....april is my favourite month...great write ★

Posted 5 Years Ago


The symbioses between us and the seasons and the living Earth is well represented here Latifa in the clever use of terms 'strokes' and 'sears' - one a comforting action, the other injurious. A lovely spiritual write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you dear Anto :)
How powerfully enchanted to see the seasons flowing into our lives... the painful shadows and the life-giving rains... May you always find the joys in each day... each month... all around you, dear poet.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you dear Froman, have a blessed day :)
An owl on the moon

5 Years Ago

Much appreciated! And blessings to you, dear Latifa... :)
Ah, changeable as the weather, smiles...beautiful..

Posted 5 Years Ago


Interesting write beloved poet.
Great write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you for the review :)
Saddam

5 Years Ago

Welcome beloved poet...
Interesting description and style. Love the relatable nature. Nicely penned. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

thank you for the review :)
Good idea. I like it.All senses are here.Thank for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


An introduction to the place you live at and the life you live.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like the sound of the poem. In these five lines, there are a lot of feelings, mood, doubt, desire, faith...

You have mixed it together in a fine poem, Latifa. :) Rudi

Posted 5 Years Ago


nice I like the positive impact of poem....
it is really true that sun smiles after the darkest night....
good well done ....

Posted 5 Years Ago



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oran, oran, Algeria



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