......................dots

......................dots

A Poem by Latifa
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some scrabble that poped in my mind, ( again fighting the blocks :)

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dots shall soon become lines ______________ space                

 then void


                             

        will it become void?

 I pray to God it won't.............I only pray


© 2015 Latifa


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Many a paradox here. Great job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


i am unable to understand the true meaning

Posted 5 Years Ago


Given the two coordinates of existence; Time ans Space, this will be the case; Emptiness. But we Pray!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I have little observation here, aren't spaces void itself?

Posted 5 Years Ago


Latifa

5 Years Ago

space is full of silent matter while void is nothingness, thats how I see it :p
Original, a touch of dadaism here, clever and new.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Short and sweet!
Well done!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ah, filling in the dots! That's what it's all about, isn't it, fearing the void.

Short and to the point (pun intended!).

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 5 Years Ago


Good! You are back. It's a small start but loaded with insights.

Regards,
Al

Posted 5 Years Ago


pretty cool, but have some meaning.
Good choice.

Posted 5 Years Ago


no need to fight the blocks Latifa you're doing just fine, this is original and very inventive, the void may be included because you feel you lack words but you fill the space with creativity, so no worries just keep on pushing back the walls of invention and the words will flow, search for theme's they exist everywhere and all around us :)

Posted 5 Years Ago



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