A Poem by Latifa

some scrabble that poped in my mind, ( again fighting the blocks :)

dots shall soon become lines ______________ space                

 then void


        will it become void?

 I pray to God it won't.............I only pray

© 2015 Latifa

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Many a paradox here. Great job.

Posted 5 Years Ago

i am unable to understand the true meaning

Posted 5 Years Ago

Given the two coordinates of existence; Time ans Space, this will be the case; Emptiness. But we Pray!

Posted 5 Years Ago

I have little observation here, aren't spaces void itself?

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

space is full of silent matter while void is nothingness, thats how I see it :p
Original, a touch of dadaism here, clever and new.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Short and sweet!
Well done!!

Posted 5 Years Ago

Ah, filling in the dots! That's what it's all about, isn't it, fearing the void.

Short and to the point (pun intended!).

Best regards,


Posted 5 Years Ago

Good! You are back. It's a small start but loaded with insights.


Posted 5 Years Ago

pretty cool, but have some meaning.
Good choice.

Posted 5 Years Ago

no need to fight the blocks Latifa you're doing just fine, this is original and very inventive, the void may be included because you feel you lack words but you fill the space with creativity, so no worries just keep on pushing back the walls of invention and the words will flow, search for theme's they exist everywhere and all around us :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Added on May 27, 2015
Last Updated on May 28, 2015



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