I Am Awake

I am awake,

on yet another day,

only to close my eyes

as the Sun slowly dies...

...and then I’ll cry.

Author's Note

Just a short poem I wrote right after waking up.

Reviews

[Mosunmola Adeniyi]

What a nice and precise poem this is, I love it

[SheIsMe]

Short and sweet. I like it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Tear before bed. A bad ending. A complete poem in so few words. Thank you Brian for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[dan]

Brian, An aching wretch of a morning dawns much too often for many of us, the tears are the pressure relief valves expelling the heart pounding pain bursts. Well done. take care...dan

[Emily]

Wow, so powerful but yet so short!
Well done!

[wordman]

at night i cry,great image you have painted

[Jamestown]

Short and sweet piece of work:)
Well penned and expressed!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Isabella Disney]

its a cool little poem, has lots of potential for a storyline and feeling. thanks for sharing :)