At Six O'Clock

I ponder many thoughts,

at six o’clock.

It is when I hear the sound

of a tick-tock.

Each moment, each beat,

the hum drum ba-dum

of a sound, ever so sweet.

The trickling waters

of time’s flow,

through and through,

as they align

me to you.

Its sound is delicate,

as it resonates art.

And its elegance

portrays that, of a

beating heart.

I find myself in awe,

at the hourglass

upon an old, dusty shelf,

that ticks away

the rest of my wealth.

At six o’clock,

I am here, upon this rock,

waiting... waiting...

for your heart,

...to sing.

One last time,

so that I can,

forever,

call you mine.

As we are now...

...lost in endless

time.

Author's Note

It's been a long time since I've posted a new poem. I hope everyone enjoys this one.

Reviews

[Rajat malik]

Enjoyed it. Felt it. Lived it

[Loaa Diab]

very interesting poem , i enjoyed it

[Gaurav]

It's a proud to read your words, as it captures beautifully the classic theme of living in now. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

[B]

Very poetically romantic
There are some moments that one wishes would remain forever
There is so much passion in your words

beautiful

[GeekyGamer128]

I like your rhyming scheme and nice flow of the poem. Great job! :D

[Alias]

lovely rhyme scheme, and i love the subject. Your stanzas vary in length, which can sometimes add to effect, but other times can spoil the flow...
I like the ending, the waiting adds a new dimension to the story. Definitely keep posting poems :)

[Breanna Riddle]

I loved it. Thank you for sharing

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful and romantic poem, Brian.

[Emily]

I like this one, it's very nuanced! I also enjoyed the sounds you chose. Great write!

[Daydreamer]

This is such a beautiful write! Loved the meaningful words; especially....

Its sound is delicate,

as it resonates art.

And its elegance

portrays that, of a

beating heart.