A Paper Mâché Heart

A Paper Mâché Heart

A Poem by Brian M. Peeples

If I had a paper mâché heart

on this pleasantly rainy day,

it may melt away and then

transform into such beautiful art,

but that would be quite okay

because as it becomes a bluejay

my heart may finally sing aloud

for all the world to see, and

such a fluorescent sound; a melody

where I can see all the colors of

the rainbow diamonds in the sky.

And as I fly this rainbow kite,

sewn from the fabric of my memories,

high above and into the sea of rainy

dreams, I will become aligned

with the night light at my bedside

as it shines brightest in the night sky

while my paper mâché heart travels

far and wide; I know, truly, that

life is a cotton candy carousel ride

that I am happy to call my home

as my heart travels the stars alone.

I know that my heart is my own

and even if it melts away,

on this pleasantly rainy day,

I know that everything will be okay

as I know that you will forever

and always stay.

© 2016 Brian M. Peeples


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Finally getting to this one, Brian.

Once again, a poem of well crafted images, flowing gently into each other. You have an eye for creating new images as can be seen in this piece.
Nicely worded and well written, as always.
Good job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very nice use of words and thoughts.
"I will become aligned
with the night light at my bedside
as it shines brightest in the night sky
while my paper mâché heart travels
far and wide"
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you Brian for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


I like this sentiment- a little light and airy for me.
But I think this one is supposed to be just that. Paper mache. Interesting and some good lines here and the poem moves and gently melts away.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Maybe I'm being overly picky...I don't know. If your writing was s****y it wouldn't bother me that you over-punctuate with commas. But your writing...your message is clear and interesting, intriguing. This could be a very nice piece, but the comma misuse clouds the picture.
I am going to stop my constructive (?) criticisms and just rate the writing. I feel I am probably getting on your nerves. Keep writing Brian, please. take care...dan

Posted 4 Years Ago


dan

4 Years Ago

Brian, You editing gives this piece a whole different complexion, a very nice flow and rhythm. Just .. read more
Brian M. Peeples

4 Years Ago

Thanks, bud. I appreciate the advice as always. And I always accept feedback as I feel it helps a pe.. read more
dan

4 Years Ago

It is my pleasure. I am always willing to help. Happy Easter! take care...dan
This is so beautiful dear friend :) I enjoyed reading it.
Thank You for sharing!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


I think this write has a certain featherless weight to it
like a paper flying in air
your heart is filled with joy

and its easy to see its beauty through these wonderful words

Posted 4 Years Ago


a poem from the heart,paper mache or real

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love that first line!!
Keep up the great work!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


ahhhh man, what an amazing and inspiring piece of ART! your words are just so easy to follow and so easy to get lost in them. somehow i find myself getting upset once the poem is done, I want more! lol I truly love your work man

Posted 4 Years Ago


Brian M. Peeples

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! I appreciate the positive response and am happy you enjoy my poetry. Know tha.. read more
PoeticChico

4 Years Ago

No Worries!

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Added on March 14, 2016
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Brian M. Peeples
Brian M. Peeples

Norwich, CT



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I am a twenty-three year old writer & poet. My passion for writing comes from all over. I love to write, and I love to inspire others. Hopefully when I'm gone one day, I'll leave behind all my writin.. more..

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