The Christmas present

The Christmas present

A Poem by Brigg Aries
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Only the Maker knows the receiver

"
There was this present beneath the Christmas tree
so mystique yet so lovely
wrapped gorgeously in snowy white
with a golden ribbon that reflects the light

My eyes cant keep the sight away
to that lovely present I look day by day
still a question whats inside the box that's coated
But by its mere beauty I was captivated

What a mysterious present it is
no one knows for whom that present is
There's just this note that reads;
"This is for your Christmas wish"

No name, no mark, no label
Only the Maker knows the receiver
He knows for who it would be best
maybe for someone who'll stand the test

There was this present beneath the Christmas tree
so mystique yet so lovely
I know it would make someone happy
so it left me hoping its named for me

© 2017 Brigg Aries


Author's Note

Brigg Aries
just added some details.

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Its nice to read about something that makes you happy. I really enjoyed it and love the ending. Nice writing.☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brigg Aries

6 Years Ago

thank you Donna
I like that you leave it up to us the reader to try to determine just what the gift was. Thank you.

Take are - Dave

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brigg Aries

6 Years Ago

Thanks Dave

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Added on December 11, 2017
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Brigg Aries
Brigg Aries

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A Poem by Brigg Aries