Mind's Eye

It's another world.
Another dimension, rather
A place running solely
On what the mind's eye gathers.
It's strong.
It's powerful.
More so than you and I.
Quite amazing considering
It seldom meets the eye.
"Is it Real?"
Well, of course!
If it's believed to be so.
Otherwise smothered
by minds that are closed.
"Where is this world you speak of?"
It's not confined, of course.
It's everywhere.
Yet no where.
Though dependable is it's source.
"Who does this place belong to?"
It's yours!
Or maybe mine...
There are no rules regarding
The Astonishing Mind's Eye.

Reviews

[Shy]

A few tweaks and this could be the start to an amazing story...
Its good either way =P
Cool poem

[Bri]

Thanks :)
Any suggestions for what I should tweak?

[Shy]

Well, if you plan on making it a story

[Bri]

Hmm I might..I've mainly stuck to poetry but I want to start branching out once school ends and I have more time

[Shy]

Good plan ^.^