First Love

Your beautiful words soothe my soul

Your soft brown eyes let me know

Your luscious lips caress my cheek

Your evident incense makes me weak

 

Your amorous touch appeases my heart

Your enticing smile is a work of art

Your joyous laughter brings people bliss

Your satin lips allure mine to kiss

 

Your heart is pure and made of gold

Your thoughts are genuine and exceptionally bold

Your gracious character remains divine

I thank god everyday that you are all mine

Reviews

[Charlie]

This is really beautiful, in a Romantic sense. I've only attempted rhyming poetry a few times, but it works here. I do hope you gave it to the wonderful girl, and made her day.

[BeautifulDisaster]

Well I am a girl, so I gave it to a guy I was dating haha. But thank you :) I worked really hard on it.