A Poem by BeautifulDisaster

Pretty much...never give up

Never doubt the abilities that are held within
Never worry about some of the weaknesses you possess
Never underestimate the strengths that spread throughout you
Never let fear’s arms hold you back from anything your heart desires
Never take a step backward, but a step forward
Never walk, but leap
Never hate who you are, accept it
Never cry from failure, but learn from it
Never let footprints cover yourself, take a stand
Never fade into the background, but stand out
Never give up, always put in the extra effort to succeed.

© 2010 BeautifulDisaster

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I liked this poem, turning negatives into positives! I do have to say though, was I the only one who had Rick Astley come into my head by the poem's end?

Posted 7 Years Ago

I find your repetition soothing and right, well done, great read.

Posted 8 Years Ago

love the repetition to start
amazing writing from the heart
great job

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Exactly! Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago

i like this shows the strengths of a human

Posted 9 Years Ago

i like this, it shows how success takes an extra effort. its a motivating reading :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

i like this. i think it would have been more powerful if you followed this format though...
"Never walk.
Never hate who you are.
Accept it."

just a thought. cool, though.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on March 16, 2010
Last Updated on March 16, 2010

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