Nightmare or Reality

Nightmare or Reality

A Poem by Khaotic Katastrophe

Head is aching

Pulse is racing

Heart is breaking

Sanity leaving

Vision blurring

Ears are ringing

Time is flying

Tears are pouring

Thoughts confusing

Staggered breathing

Hands are shaking

Blood is dripping

Body’s screaming

Trees are howling

Moon is glaring

Clouds are smiling

Rain is taunting

Thunder rolling

Lightning flashing

Death is waiting.

My terrifying nightmare becomes reality.

© 2010 Khaotic Katastrophe


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I love this!
It's so sharp and it made my mind spin.
It reminds me of the part in those horror films where the main character escapes the murderer and is running through the trees in a storm and you're not sure if they'll make it out alive.
Amazingly written, I could felt it as I read it.

-Elissa :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Excellent consistency. Because most of the lines are only 4 syllables, it was easy to read and kept a nice rhythm to the flow. Over all, it was very chilling. Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


terse verse seems to be your forte.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice! I love all of the personification :} and the story it tells just stops my heart and takes my breath away amazing work here!!

-QG

Posted 11 Years Ago


i like it i felt you worked hard on this one

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent. The pace and drive of this poem really carries you breathtakingly along. Smart.

"Time is flying
Tears are pouring"

Really good.


Posted 11 Years Ago


thats is really sad

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the way you wrote this, at all its sad poem. Good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is OK but it isn't the best. I really can't feel any relation to it... Well, my personal opinion. Nice try though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love this!
It's so sharp and it made my mind spin.
It reminds me of the part in those horror films where the main character escapes the murderer and is running through the trees in a storm and you're not sure if they'll make it out alive.
Amazingly written, I could felt it as I read it.

-Elissa :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe that is sad. I really enjoyed it though. I can relate. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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