14

14

A Poem by Brooklyn

Here I am at fourteen
I've got all these crazy dreams
I can't wait to be
young, wild, and free
but the bars of my cage
are all I see

© 2012 Brooklyn


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Short, but wonderfully said! Great job! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Short poems are not usually that good.. But this one is great! The way I see it, the length symbolizes how quickly your year of being 14 passes. These few lines capture many 14-year-olds' lives quite well..
xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


Being young can be a challenge. Developing mental powers cause fantastic new ideas. What appears to be restraining bars are in reality a protective screen. Your parents want you to grow and develope, hopefully without the pain of bad experiences. At each step in your age you'll feel the same way. Keep on writing poetry; that won't hurt you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


like it short and wonderful

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hmm, unique. I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


mixed feelings...
I actually loved this one, and i can understand how you feel. a unique write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mixed feelings from mixed perspectives. To be honest, I know this has a lot of meaning but it seems a little low for you and can be giving either a wrong impression or bad one. Some of those words have multiple meanings and it has interesting context.
Not what I was expecting

Posted 7 Years Ago


Awesome write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Such a wonderful write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow!! Really great job! I can relate :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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I'm a fourteen year old girl that is now in her freshman year of highschool. wish me luck!. I'm awful at spelling, and I need to work on "down time" in stories. I also can't seem to write one book for.. more..

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