Opposites Attract

Opposites Attract

A Poem by bryandc15

Life and Death,
  absolutely different
  yet great connection ties it.
  to become a part of each.

You never can say
  "I'll die today"
  Knowingly considering
  you're not existing.

Life wouldn't be called
  with the name itself,
  when Death is nowhere
  in this broad aspect.

Great and small,
  different indeed.
  However, great is undefined
  When small is not around.

Beauty and ugly,
  Obviously different.
  But how can you say something's ugly,
  if you don't know what it meant by beauty?

Man and woman,
  completely opposite.
  But a man cannot live without a woman,
  woman without a man.

Piece as this
  cleared the idea.
  Interconnection happens
  between opposite areas.

Without the expense of one,
  both are nothing indeed.
  For purpose comes with things,
  and everything comes for something.


-bryandc15


Things purposely made.
Thoughts carefully examined.
Methods thoroughly formulated.
All these realized,
When everything's too late.

© 2013 bryandc15


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Yin and yang. A beautiful poem indeed. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Thought provoking. Very effective poetry. Thank you for posting this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

My pleasure.
great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Everything needs an equal opposite. This was a lovely poem and I enjoyed reading it. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you Taylor H. :) I'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece.
A striking piece of philosophy...death is generally considered to be something worse than life, but life would have no meaning without it, and is worthy of our respect for that reason...well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Yeah, you're absolutely right. Thank you for this review:)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

No problem :)
This is an amazing look at it all

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

thank you:)
this is very good. It contains a lot of truth. Only thing that I would change is "You'll never can say" maybe take out the 'll part and just have "you". Great Write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


nicely done...a good expression of the dualities of life and existance...yer last addition is very nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you for this review.
Wonderful! There is no right without wrong, and no cold without heat. Opposites definitely have a lot in common!

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it:)
Good write in concept. You may want to consider in stanza 2 the use of you"ll...did you mean just you ? Overall, I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Legazpi City, Roman Catholic, Philippines



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