A Poem by Brytt

A poem written in the spur of the moment.


What can I say

The world dies inside

While I just snack on cakes and pies


What is there to do

I don't want to speak

For fear of sounding out of place


This is just a moment

I'm just trying to help

But I don't know if I can make a difference


This is just a breath

In the life of a suburban girl

Who will probably never be a big shot


This is my life in a word

I will never stop dreaming

Even if it means ridicule and despair


However long we have left

I don't know what I can say to you

But if this is just a second, I have to try



© 2011 Brytt

Author's Note

Be brutal. If it sucks, say so; if it rocks, say so.

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I like it a lot...tension is held throughout and keeps the reader spinning with the thread of thoughts :) Great piece love! xx

Posted 12 Years Ago

deep, Where I grew up people share this same frame of mind. Are they right? I don't know. I hope not. Great write I connected.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Posted 12 Years Ago

I love this. I really do. I think "spur of the moment" poems are the best, because they really capture what you are feeling at that moment in time; they are often more wild and raw. They are the only kind of poems I write. Well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it! It captures the idea of indescisiveness very well!

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's awesome! Deep lady!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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6 Reviews
Added on June 21, 2011
Last Updated on October 13, 2011
Tags: Hello, moment, life, hope, earth, world, difference



Britt, IA

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