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I Don't Believe

I Don't Believe

A Poem by bubblepup13

I've heard the stories

a virgin birth

He healed the lame and dying

but to me

stories are all they are

same as any disney movie

i don't believe in Jesus

and maybe even God

this Christian face

isn't mine

I simply don't believe

there are too many people

"more holier than thou"

too many wars

and senseless killing

it just doesn't make sense

but I believe in Christmas Spirit

in laughter, care, and love

and so I celebrate Christmas

but not as divine birth

as holiday time

with holiday people

and the simple joy of love

what I hate most

about these beliefs

is not knowing what others will think

my Christian friends

and family

mixed with me

and my new way

I know people will see

I know people will hear

but don't be sad or grieve

please be happy

because I can't find fear

in that which I don't believe

© 2008 bubblepup13

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems

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It was a nicely written piece. It was structured well and flowed well, and there was something about the mood of the poem that helped to invoke feeling in the reader. I liked it a lot and keep writing! I want to see more!

Posted 12 Years Ago

I concur with your conclusions my friend I believe in god but have no time fpr organised religions at dagger drawn with each other. Each convinced their way is the only way

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on December 23, 2008



Phoenix, AZ

fine, i got one. you guys happy now? anyway... yeah. I am not an author, a writer, or any of the like. I do not consider myself as such. but i do write some when i feel inspired or emotional. i usual.. more..