...Vicious.

 Wonder
Wait
Watch
Want
Think
Toss
Turn
Bleed
Burn

Live
Love
Want
Wait

Think
Toss
Turn
Bleed
Burn

No Sleep.
Think 
Toss
Turn
Burn

Bleed
Want
Love
Lose
Burn
Wonder

The Vicious Circle.
It is our downfall...
Only love, and honesty can stop it.

 

Reviews

[J]

This is great.So true.Great job with this.

[Mortricia]

I think I just went through this cycle for your poem. Goodness.

[Ms. Gruye]

anything with a title of vicious will automatically make me think of Lou Reed. hmmm....your use of single words like tiny bullets was interesting. I would suggest keeping that format through out the piece. Also, I think this piece would lend itself to being read out loud rather than on the page.

[Emily]

This is completely true. I really agree with the idea that it is a viscous circle. It is hard to deal with things which seemingly have no end. There needs to be 'perfection' and love, and honesty to make things work this way.

Lovely piece. It is not so depressing if you remember that you can indeed stop the problems when you realize that you can find true love.