Who?

As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death 

All I see is red 

The blood of the young is shed  

If karma is a b***h then what do monsters get?

Bullets in the head? 

Poisoned snakes in the bed? 

And who resurrects the dead? 

The nailed God who bled? 

The Demon with his evil breath? 

Delicious smells to young nostrils, feeding them like birds on bread 

Hungry brains full of violence, constantly fed 

So who's to blame for this bloodshed? 

As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death 

All I see is red  

  

Author's Note

My heart just vomited this poem

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Well-served is the writer who can take a dark concept and articulate it beautifully...of course this is not a happy beautiful, but an intense beautiful...well done :)

[EMMIE]

Thank you much!

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)

[Shane Blackheart]

Wow, I really liked this one! Very awesome and dark, and I'm not just saying that because I like dark-themed works. I honestly loved the flow, the rhyme, and everything about it.

[EMMIE]

=D thank ya!

[Rene Velez]

good poem, visual and descriptive, One critique if I may, the rhyme need not be so upfront sometimes allowing a few lines without rhyme adds more, like every other line rhyming, just a suggestion Em.

[EMMIE]

Good looking out, appreciate u!

[khalid]

very nicely written although i felt death in every line of it..

[FelicityAllona]

w-o-w!!!
this is amazing and worth reading :D

thumbs up!! :D

[EMMIE]

Thank You!

[FelicityAllona]

your welcome.. :)

[Tree]

Damn. This is straight from the soul (and gut). Love the energy ––––the flow. If this just came out don't change a thing. Thing is this has depth to it too, read it over you keep finding things. nice write

[EMMIE]

Lol well thank you, Diego!