I WAS HERE

I WAS HERE

A Poem by EMMIE

I touched your walls
I danced to the beat of your heart
I made it the soundtrack of my life
I was here

I bathed in your warm feelings
I basked in the light of your love
I swam in the deepest waters of your tears
I was here

I carved my name in your veins
I cleaned your arteries 
I sang a happy tune to your sadness
I was here 

Inside of your heart

© 2012 EMMIE


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This is beautiful!!!!!


Posted 9 Years Ago


EMMIE

9 Years Ago

Thanks!
This is the first piece of yours that I've read, and it's gorgeous...a cluster of devotional gestures that come together seamlessly^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


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EMMIE

9 Years Ago

Appreciate that
your writings stir up deep emotions

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very intimate. Precise and heartfelt. Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awesome! This speaks deeply to the heart with all the emotions wrapped up tight, right there!. Love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is very affectionate and at the same time intimate. I like how you described the love that you had for the person in how you were when you were with them. Incredible poem, Emmie.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice write, heartfelt words Emmie.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A wonderful poem about a loved one leaving a mark on one's heart. I really liked this, thanks for sharing it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


oh so romantic, wonderful!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 4, 2012
Last Updated on February 17, 2012
Tags: LOVE, HEART, TEARS, VEINS, SONG, HAPPY, LIGHT, SUN, BEAUTY


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