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10 word poem for competition

Seductively your red dress stole eyes, secretly yearning goddess strength.

Author's Note

restored

Reviews

[Rye]

very nicely written, I enjoyed this

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Ooooo did I read this one before, can't remember, but I love it! "Goddess strength" especially, the imagination thrives there, :P ---mimi

[Brette Medb]

short and sweet just the way I like 'em ; ).... i really did like this though especially the part about the red dress and the goddess strength...well done!

[Crystal L. Test]

This was wonderfully done. I can never seem to sum up so much with so little words. I envy that gift. The title fits the piece perfectly. Very well done.

[Anwar]

So true! Women can be very potent. And the words you have chosen reveal the sensuous power of the passion that lies within. Created a good visual for me and I could sense the woman as she moved I imagine across the room. Powerful.

Anwar x

[Eric]

You capture the wink and nod of a sexy moment. Nice.

(The icon you chose seems a part of this poem-good choice)

[Celtic Cat]

Excellent.

[R J Askew]

Brilliant pic, love the way the eye's looking left to righ... Hmm, this line was not as strong for me as the labyrinthe line, tis longer to start with...and the second part seems slightly hesitant. Don't you need to be in full goddess mode to don red dress in first place ??????

[Ashentara]

oh wow such powerful imagery in so few words, greatly done my dear!

[John Herrin - Determine..]

Strong image. This is one of those lines so captivating that it would take far more than a single sentence to describe the sensual effect it has on the reader.