Lonely Gentleman

Lonely Gentleman

A Poem by Ray Hamilton
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Dedicated To A Dear Friend

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Lonely Gentleman

 

As the petals drip from these pretty red roses

The moon in the night sky ~ like a lonely gentleman poses

He knows when you are away he will miss you so

Wishes on a star ~ that you didn't have to go

 

As seven spanish angels plays

He prays that to happiness ~ you will find your way

He knows that you and he shall never meet

That doesn't stop his heart from skipping a beat

 

He has seen all your gentle loving ways

You show them to him more each day

He adores your friendship more than you know

Appreciates all the kindness you have shown

 

For your health and happiness he does pray

As he dances across the clouds till the break of day

Your good friend he will always be

 

In case you haven't guessed it

This lonely gentleman is me

By
Ray Hamilton

© Copyright 6 / 2008
All rights Reserved

 

 

Please Visit Me at The Poet's Nest


 

 

© 2008 Ray Hamilton


Author's Note

Ray Hamilton
Dedicated To A Dear Friend

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lovely imagery in your poem...its quite the read. thanks for sharing...

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a magnificent poem. The words are wonderful, so poignant, so touching. The way you have laid the page out, the images and the background music really adds something to make it stand out. I love the work, and wish you every success in the contest.

I have to ask this; please, be not offended, but in the first line you use the word 'peddles' as in:
As the peddles drip from these pretty red roses
Perhaps, is there a meaning in American English I'm not aware of, but being from UK. I read the word as a verb meaning to sell or trade goods, whereas you appear to use the same as a noun.

Excellent piece of writing, and thanks for posting.


Posted 13 Years Ago


you are a romantic, beautiful write
doreen

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is such a beautiful, heartfelt poem. I did feel these
words, and thank you for entering it in my contest. AD

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fantastic poem! I liked it. '...till the break of the day' it will surely remain in me, and again the following day it will start its action.

That is the quality of a good poem.

Thank you.

Raja

Posted 13 Years Ago


A friend sent the link beauty you pen..the spanish angels plays the beauty in your heart love and light

Posted 13 Years Ago


It seems we all have walked in your shoes at one time or another,,well written and a very nice thought of Willy Nelson and the blind singer "7 Spanish Angels" one of my favorite songs only at this minute.oh Ray Charles...for a "non poet" you write very well and hold a persons attention until the ending,,Nice flow and write,,God bless..Valentine

Posted 13 Years Ago


that is a beautiful poem.it seems you really appreciate all shes done and given you.Not to many people now a days appreciate others.I really loved it thank you for sharing a great poem,it helps me more then you know.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A delightful dedication for your friend so beautifully expressed and well penned~Fran

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is what friendship is all about! I am sure your friend adores this piece! I know I do! Fantastic job darlin!

Janice ann

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ray Hamilton
Ray Hamilton

Morrisburg Ontario Canada, Canada



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