A Wish-Maker to a Lone-Lover

Just one of my 70-ish poetries. Romantic one.

I’m all ears baby, all the time

I want yours tears to cry as if they were mine

Let me feel your pain, let me feel for you

Honey, put yours dreams in a gift-box and I’ll make them all come true

 

And you’re feeling empty, feeling all alone

Look hopefully to the moon, and I’ll turn it into a sun

Tell me all you’re secrets, tell me one by one

Then let’s fall in love and write ours names in a stone

 

Let my passion wash your soul,

And I’ll make your happiness my only goal.

When you’re afraid of dark, just give me your hand

I’ll hug you close, ‘cause you’re the only one I understand

 

If you’re standing in a dead end,

Close your eyes and smile the best you can,

I’ll see you’re smile from miles afar

And then I’ll send you off a shining star

 

I’ll make you’re nature stronger

I’ll sing you’re favorite song

I’ll make you’re seasons longer

And I swear I’ll never be gone

 

Caio Emmanuel                              

                                                                                                                      

19/06/07

Author's Note

Personally it's not one of my favorites, but it was one of the few that was written in English, so I didn't have to translate it.

Reviews

[Renae]

It may not be one of your favorites but I love it. It's very pretty and very, very sweet.
I'm not sure why, but my favorite bit is:

"If you’re standing in a dead end,
Close your eyes and smile the best you can"

It's just lovely. :) The entire thing is. I think you did a very nice job with this poem, sir.

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

I really like this.
It's classy & very beautiful.
I love it!
Amazing write!!
-Elissa :)