angels cry.

angels cry.

A Poem by irishprincess
"

its like a peom/story it deosnt ryhme

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Every night i hear shouting and screaming

I cry to drown out their vioces

My friends think i have it all

what would they know, I can not trust them with the pain i carry

and even though they are my friends I know they wouldnt understand

Not alot of people can understand the way my mind works

Every night I cry and dream of escaping by own private hell

sometimes i even think that they angels can hear my cries

i feel lost i dont know what to do i'm running out of time now.

i dont have long left

sometimes i am in so much pain i honestly think that i can hear the angels cries because in a way the pain is being inflicted on them.

But I know that in the end MY angel will keep me safe from evils door and protet me from harms way.

 

© 2012 irishprincess


Author's Note

irishprincess
sorry for any spelling mistakes towards the end of this because there is this huge black thing stretching across my screen

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A powerful poem with a sad story. A lot of people had hard home life and few will know their pain. I like the way you told the story in the poem. The poem had a feel of realness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A powerful poem with a sad story. A lot of people had hard home life and few will know their pain. I like the way you told the story in the poem. The poem had a feel of realness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is quite amazing,
I enjoyed this.
Keep writing always.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazing write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

..Very good poem. The emotions you have in this poem are very much felt by just the words. I loved the line "I can not trust them with the pain I carry" I have felt that way plenty of times so I relate. Keep writing ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Excellent write again Caitlin. I wish you and your angel well.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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irishprincess

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my name is caitlin im fourteen im from ireland. i love reading and writing. i also really like learning langauges.i am on twitter facebook. i like horror movies i like the books angels in my hair, li.. more..

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