You Blind Her

My friend and her reactions to her boyfriend.

You are all she ever speaks of,

You are all that’s on her mind,

You are all she ever dreams of,

You truly make her blind.

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She can’t see the real you,

The one who’s ignorant and mean,

The one who’s always with other girls,

She doesn’t see the whole scene.

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You are all that she thinks of,

You are all that she adores,

You are all she’s ever wanted,

But not for long, not anymore.

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One day she’s going to wake up,

From this trance you have her in,

She’ll realize who you really are,

Her strength will finally wear thin.

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She will finally see the real you,

The one who’s ignorant and mean,

The on who’s with other girls,

She will see the entire scene.

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You won’t be who she speaks of,

You won’t always be on her mind,

You won’t be in any of her dreams,

The true you, she will find.

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Although she’ll find the true you,

It is you she will miss,

And every time you cross her mind,

She’ll remember and reminisce.

Reviews

[kij143]

This is my favorite one. Really nice perspective here; good job(:

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Your words are true. We will be overtaking by someone. They will leave a permanent scar on the mind and heart. I like the pace and the ending.
"You won’t be who she speaks of,
You won’t always be on her mind,
You won’t be in any of her dreams,
The true you, she will find."
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote