Hey There Little Man

Hey There Little Man

A Poem by Caleb Benton

Hey there little man, with the big gun in your hand,

Think before you aim, who is it that's really to blame?

Hey there little man, so you want to take a stand?

Think before pulling the trigger, will you feel any bigger?

Hey there little man, with the big gun in your hand,

Now that you've shot, you're going to be caught.

Hey there little man, who has decided to take a stand,

Now that you've killed, are your desires fulfilled?

 

 

© 2009 Caleb Benton


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There are so many undiscovered undertones in this piece. It's quite short, but effectively packs a very large punch.

I wonder though, where it comes from. Whether intentional or not, it's very artful in the delivery. Much like a car crash, it happens so quickly, you can't see it coming.

Love it. Love you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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There are so many undiscovered undertones in this piece. It's quite short, but effectively packs a very large punch.

I wonder though, where it comes from. Whether intentional or not, it's very artful in the delivery. Much like a car crash, it happens so quickly, you can't see it coming.

Love it. Love you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this alot. It should be read by everyone who thinks solving the problem with a gun is the answer. Very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I really like this. The last line was the real punch...and I liked the rhyming scheme as well. Bravo!

-Jane

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ohhh i loved that poem. very creative and you can see the thoughts behind it. hmm so yeah great great job:)

never stop writing
Liza

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Caleb Benton
Caleb Benton

Lubbock, TX



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Ok, I tried the invisible bio thing and it wasn't very popular, so here it goes. I write only when inspiration strikes, which unfortunately is not too often. I'm 20 and from the flattest part of Te.. more..

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