Give Me Your Eyes

I've lived most my life, perception distorted.

False truths I've believed; environment supported.

I've sought after love, seeking to find.
Something I've always had, of a kind.

Time I've been wasting, impossible to replace.
Its gone now, lost in the past without a trace.
I NOW VOW TO WASTE ABSOLUTELY NO TIME AT ALL.
I GIVE MYSELF UP TO YOU AND TO US FOR THE LONG HAUL

Reviews

[The Twin Arenas]

Huh. This is alright. "I NOW VOW TO WASTE ABSOLUTELY NO TIME AT ALL" looks rad in all caps. Nice use of a semi colon, too. I think you used it right. I'm scared shitless of those things. I don't even know if I spell it right. Lubbock is a nice place. To visit, anyway. Keep writing.

[SmittyJas]

Lovely Gesture I only have eyes for you.