I Am

I Am

A Poem by CalebSchadeck

I am a weird teen who likes pets

I wonder why the sky is blue

I hear the snow hit the ground as it falls

I see the blue sky and wonder

I want to be successful in every part of my life

I am a weird teen who likes pets

 

I pretend that I control a world that is not there

I feel myself slip out of my body and into my world

I touch the soft clouds as I look up at the blue sky and wonder

I worry about growing up, and facing the many challenges the world has to offer

I cry at the thought of animal abuse

I am a weird teenager who likes pets

 

I understand that the world I create is not real

I say that I will be successful in my life

I dream of being a writer

I try to make an effort to treat others with kindness

I hope they return the favor of my kindness

I am a weird teen who likes pets  

© 2011 CalebSchadeck


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CalebSchadeck
poem for school hope you like :))

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very nice. i liked your use of repetitivness, and the imagery you created with your words was wonderful. great job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the way you express yourself with this... you have a wonderful soul and it shines through this piece..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 30, 2011
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CalebSchadeck
CalebSchadeck

Carson City , NV



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I have loved writing all my life... not much else to say, just want to share my work. I am also a major Whovian ever since about three monts ago, I love that show! more..

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