Sad Soul

Sad Soul

A Poem by Carissa Marie

I am a sad soul drifting away
To a place called happiness.
A place where everything seems surreal.
I see the faces of people who knows not
The feeling of sadness,
The feeling of disappointment,
The feeling of pain.
I feel this strange sensation of warmth,
Of pure pleasure
Emanating from each one of them.
I can sense none of their sorrows,
Nor their hidden tears and fears.
I hear their laughter,
A sound so alien to my ears,
A sound so beautiful and so sincere.
I watch in awe and wonder,
Like I was seeing the sun for the first time
In so many years.
I felt a pang of jealousy,
For this strange feeling that I could never feel.
For I am just a sad soul, 
Drifting away to a place unreal.

© 2013 Carissa Marie


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i love the line
A sound so beautiful and so sincere.
the tone seems to just go with the flow

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
wow such an emotional filled write, enjoyed

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed. Thank you. :)
One of your best poems so far! This reminds me of what I was like in High School.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

Me too. High school wasn't good to me. :P
Love.Laugh.Live.

11 Years Ago

Well... its in the past now. It made us who we are today?
you open up so wonderfully
there is so much emotion behind these words beautiful really like seeing the sun for the first time
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much. I think the poem's kinda depressing though. =))
Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

well maybe that is how you feel today...then this is written straight from the heart which is always.. read more
Carissa Marie

11 Years Ago

Hahaha. Thank you for trying to make me smile. I really appreciate it.

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Added on March 1, 2013
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Carissa Marie
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21. Female. AB Journalism. Philippines. :) Introvert. Weird. Over-thinker. Music lover. Bookworm. Frustrated Artist. Writing is my therapy. "Let my words be your own form of immortality" .. more..

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