phantom strings

phantom strings

A Poem by callie...

PHANTOM STRINGS
a murmuration of starlings
grounded into earthlings
clocked in and clipped wings
gravity and the weight it brings...
a wreck of birds thrown into this sea
sucked into whirls and pools of catastrophe
hypnotized by the persistence of memory
chasing the costly, instead of letting things be...

© 2009 callie...


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Really great style here I like it.. it is different and the words all stand powerfully punctuating eachother..very good stuff ..

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is short yet very lovely.
"a wreck of birds thrown into this sea
sucked into whirls and pools of catastrophe"
Amazing line.
This write is fantastic but personally I find that the font you have chosen takes away from the poem a little.
Excellent write overall!
-Elissa :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a short piece but it is really beautiful and simple with a beautiful skeam of words that you rarely see its very unique.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 7, 2009
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About
my desires, intentions, dreams, hopes, fears, and sometimes, (in my most awake moments) everyday interactions, all revolve around finding, feeling, hearing, and attempting to create what resonates...... more..

Writing
denial denial

A Poem by callie...