No Soul

it's only the truth.

I have no life, i have no soul

I smile on the outside and cry on the inside

My heart is now a big gaping hole

I'll never be the same no matter how hard i try

Author's Note

Responses? i don't know sometimes i sound like i'm depressed. maybe i am but i don't think so.

Reviews

[light and ashes]

we all feel like this at certain points in our life I believe, or most of us do. This is written with the strands of your heart. Very nice. I enjoyed reading it, and I think this poem speaks to most of us who have been through anything really tough in our lifes.

[Coyote Poetry]

For someone to know peace. They must find something worthwhile to live for. A strong soul know how to love and be kind. The heart is a different organ. Always searching and questioning. I like this poem. Open the door for many questions. In the end of a life. People with strong heart and kind words will be remembered. The soul is in constant battle to know peace. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[lovely-livia]

hahahahahaha ur not depressed it think its purrrty!

[SOUL LESS]

Cliche. And at least you can cry. If you can you're not SOUL LESS. That's why I am :)