No Soul

No Soul

A Poem by Ashli The Amazing
"

it's only the truth.

"

I have no life, i have no soul

I smile on the outside and cry on the inside

My heart is now a big gaping hole

I'll never be the same no matter how hard i try

© 2011 Ashli The Amazing


Author's Note

Ashli The Amazing
Responses? i don't know sometimes i sound like i'm depressed. maybe i am but i don't think so.

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we all feel like this at certain points in our life I believe, or most of us do. This is written with the strands of your heart. Very nice. I enjoyed reading it, and I think this poem speaks to most of us who have been through anything really tough in our lifes.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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For someone to know peace. They must find something worthwhile to live for. A strong soul know how to love and be kind. The heart is a different organ. Always searching and questioning. I like this poem. Open the door for many questions. In the end of a life. People with strong heart and kind words will be remembered. The soul is in constant battle to know peace. A excellent poem.
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Posted 13 Years Ago


hahahahahaha ur not depressed it think its purrrty!

Posted 13 Years Ago


we all feel like this at certain points in our life I believe, or most of us do. This is written with the strands of your heart. Very nice. I enjoyed reading it, and I think this poem speaks to most of us who have been through anything really tough in our lifes.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cliche. And at least you can cry. If you can you're not SOUL LESS. That's why I am :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ashli The Amazing
Ashli The Amazing

riverbank, CA



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Names Ashli. I'm 16. A junior in high school. I'm Straight. I love music. I love singing I have a YouTube account (search Ashli Cisneros) I love rainbows, UNICORNS, and writing poetry in my free time... more..

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