Mother Natures Love

Mother Natures Love

A Poem by Ashli The Amazing
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Love in nature

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I can hear the slow breeze

In the tall redwood trees

I can see the sweet dew

As the sun comes shining through

I can smell the fresh pine

As the birds begin to chime

I can feel the wet soil beneath my feet

As i stand in the suns rays of heat

I can taste your lips on mine

This is how i know everything will be fine

© 2011 Ashli The Amazing


Author's Note

Ashli The Amazing
i really hope that everything will be fine.

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Beautiful poem, full of emotions and dreams, loved it...

Posted 11 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. Combining nature and life allow the reader to understand the emotion in your words. I like the description and the positive ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really enjoy nature-inspired poetry-- well done !

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful! This reminds me of visiting Muir Woods when I was younger. You paint an excellent picture that just flows from one line to the next. It's easy to feel the peace and happiness. Neat how you incorporated each of the five senses, too.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ashli The Amazing
Ashli The Amazing

riverbank, CA



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Names Ashli. I'm 16. A junior in high school. I'm Straight. I love music. I love singing I have a YouTube account (search Ashli Cisneros) I love rainbows, UNICORNS, and writing poetry in my free time... more..

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