Goodbye Kiss

Goodbye Kiss

A Poem by Ashli The Amazing

I hate goodbye Kisses ]:

When a goodbye kiss
Feels like this
It's so hard to let you go
Do i want you to leave? No
I told you I would love you all my life
And you said someday I'll make you my wife
But I'm starting to think it was all a lie
You hurt me and all i can do is cry
Why doesn't love last?
Whatever i don't care anymore it's in the past
Life will get better
i refuse to stay sad forever.

© 2011 Ashli The Amazing

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Nice write ;) I like your way of writing ;) Good work, keep it going on ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago

A familiar sentiment - I hated being a teenager! Well penned and thoughfully expressed.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Goodbye kisses are the hardest for deep down we can sense it's a final goodbye.

Posted 13 Years Ago

wow....sometimes I think you girls...write a tit for tat to my poetry...

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Its really good goodbyes are always hard and love sometimes last forever sometimes not all the time

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is intimate, personal, authentic and peculiar. Simple but tells too much about your very inner personality.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Aw loved how you started off sad then flipped it around. Well written and targets those little thoughts and emotions you convey. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Posted 13 Years Ago

Liked the positive vibe in the poem. It's better to move on as life doesn't stop for anything. Nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago

i wish everyone could move on like you said:) but it's very hard:)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on June 16, 2011
Last Updated on June 18, 2011


Ashli The Amazing
Ashli The Amazing

riverbank, CA

Names Ashli. I'm 16. A junior in high school. I'm Straight. I love music. I love singing I have a YouTube account (search Ashli Cisneros) I love rainbows, UNICORNS, and writing poetry in my free time... more..


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