Loves Chance

Loves Chance

A Poem by Ashli The Amazing
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do you believe in true love?

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When Someone says I Love You
How do you know it's true?
Do you listen to what they say
And just say okay?

Do  you think true love is real?
Everyone says it's something you feel
Deep in your heart
And will never stop spreading once it starts

I don't know what to believe anymore
Because I've never felt this way before
I'm scared of getting hurt
I have this feeling that things won't work

I'm afraid to let my guard down
But every time I think of  you my heart begins to pound
Should I go with what my heart says?
Or should I go with my instincts instead?

It's so hard to choose
But hey,  what have I got to lose?
I think it's time for me to take a chance
So baby. . . Let's dance!



© 2011 Ashli The Amazing


Author's Note

Ashli The Amazing
Thanks Roze Collions for the title! [:

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This poem has an unexpected ending, which I really like. The words in red make a statement. Congrats :)!

Posted 12 Years Ago


so baby let's dance... unexpected is the end, but I like it... It's like, let's try our chance and dance... The poem is imple and it's simplicity improves how authentic it is. The words in red are significant which is beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazing!
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh big sis when it is true love you will know it
you will feel a connection that will not be broken
even by death or time
it is the soul mate love and never dies

Posted 13 Years Ago


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TJ
Very wonderful and inspirational poem and you showed it with the best example that's out there...love
Good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awesome! I like how the ending is inspiring and hopeful instead of the character giving up and not taking a chance.

Posted 13 Years Ago


loves chance.................. i like it keep up the good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a very interesting poem as it questions love where not many do. I like that. But really how do you know? It's tough telling someone you love them when you really don't though, I know I've been through that. But for me I followed my instincts and when I didn't, I got hurt. I like the ending- " I think it's time for me to take a chance, So baby....let's dance!"

Posted 13 Years Ago


Many opportunities for title in the poem. I like the title "Should I dance?". I like the way you brought out the questions to love or escape. Take no chances. Have no fun. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like it ! i really do i can relate to it and agree with people have to live fear free because fear stops you from doing many things great write favorite !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ashli The Amazing
Ashli The Amazing

riverbank, CA



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Names Ashli. I'm 16. A junior in high school. I'm Straight. I love music. I love singing I have a YouTube account (search Ashli Cisneros) I love rainbows, UNICORNS, and writing poetry in my free time... more..

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