cold feet

cold feet

A Poem by Candy Cane
"

oh my restless heart

"

cause i'm never satisfied

so damn hard to please

always wanting more

and baby you aint got what i need

I got the cold feet and you got the silk sheets

you'll be picking out our wedding cake

i'll be steady planning my escape

and i'll fall in love again so fast

you wont have time to blink

 

 

© 2008 Candy Cane


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uhh!! i loved the pace of this poem..... it was like a quick smack!! i liked it.. it makes a nice read and i also liked the title.. its cool n hot i guess!! ;)

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Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


hey i feel that, yo, its short - simple and well put, way too go, i have to keep writing in this box untill it tells me i earned a point, oh sweet there we go =)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 30, 2008
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Author

Candy Cane
Candy Cane

Richmond, VA



Writing
innocence innocence

A Poem by Candy Cane