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Drowned Memories

Drowned Memories

A Poem by nevershoutnever.
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Random, I guess...

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My window's fogging up,

making it all so hard to see.

I have the music playing loud,

so I can drown out my memories.

Thought's go back to you,

though, I'd kill for them not to.

I hate how I feel

when you first come into my view.

Since the past is history,

what is tomorrow's mystery?

© 2011 nevershoutnever.


Author's Note

nevershoutnever.
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@A. Bennett- Thanks. I read a quote similar to the last two lines and came up with this. I realize that, about the apostrophe, thank you, though. Thank you :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked this a lot, especially the last two lines. It has a very pleasant rhyme scheme and interesting rhythm. 'Thought's' doesn't need an apostrophe though, but other than that there's nothing I can suggest. It's a great piece. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 7, 2011
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Tags: cant see, gone, goodbyes, no, stop

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nevershoutnever.
nevershoutnever.

Royal Oak, MI



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I started to write a big paragraph about my life, but who would read it? Emma: thirteen; unable to make decisions; curious; fidgety; OCD - maybe; loving; too caring; kind-heart; humorous; bubbly; t.. more..

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