Without A Doubt

Because 

lover's dance when

they're feeling in love.

Spotlight shining just on us,

and that was only what

ever was.

Your arms were

wrapped around me.

left me feeling

too happy.

I knew that it was

too good to be true.

I was right,

now look at you.

Fishy lips 

and kissing sounds

filled the air,

all around.

I wanted to die,

leave me alone tonight.

The hate I put in

towards you each day,

is so hard,

it takes my breath away.

When will I be giving up,

let you be sorry

and take your love?

Will things ever

be normal again,

my heart hurts so

know it's not a game.

I said i love you,

that wasn't a lie.

Yours were though,

wish I'd seen it

in your eyes

before

this whole f*****g night.

My fingers ache

from typing so much,

ranting on about you

ruining our love.

I was happy,

so were you.

Then why'd you bring in

someone new?

Our love was fine and

perfectly true.

Why should I even

believe you.

The words I love you

came out your mouth,

and I wanted to scream,

craved to shout.

Now all I want is to

shout it out,

all this pain that

you have caused throughout

me, myself and I.

That's all I have left and

it makes me want to die.

I'm so ashamed

that i dreamt of

calling you mine.

Out of time,

I'm so done now,

my heart is dead, though,

without a doubt.

Author's Note

What to do?

Reviews

[Legacy]

DarkAngel13,

As sadness brings anger, thus, anger brings rants... NICE JOB!

Love hate relationships are in every aspect of our lives, from jobs to parents, from parents to siblings, from siblings to friends, from friends to partners etc.

Honestly, this is raw and pure and uninhibited. When we are angry comes our finest hour in writing... I have a feeling that you know this all too well.

Good job on putting it on page!

Hope things are better and you are always writing!

Have a great day,

Legacy

[nevershoutnever.]

@kdpgrahi- Thanks!
@Kim- It did, but thanks!
@Gleek4ever21- Thanks!
@Legacy- Ohmigawd! Thank you :)

[Gleek4ever21]

I love this poem! It's really personal and deep!

[deeps]

This is so heart breaking & sad. I am so sorry. You expressed your emotions well. That has to help somewhat to get it off of your chest. If not I am sorry.

[kdpgrahi]

A good write I love it

[nevershoutnever.]

@White-Inked Pen- It isn't hard...it just happened...but thanks.

[White Ink]

Well, it is very "depressing" indeed!.. this love hate kinda feeling..
you delivered your emotions well.. Cheers! :)