What you did to me

What you did to me

A Poem by capn_bribri

 she walks down the halls with her head 

she the new girl, the one kids get dared to say hi to 
as she's in the bathroom crying she hears 
people come in 
"have you seen that new girl?"
"yeah she so ugly"
"and did you see her outfit? can you 
say emo!"
she gets up and opens the stall door
she runs 
out the bathroom all the way home
she goes to her room and cries herself to 
 when her dad gets home he wakes her up
"how was your day?"
she hides her pain
"great I made a lot of friends!"
she smiles to make him believe 
he leaves and she finds her razor
never to deep 
it take's away the pain 
but this time she hits a vain 
as she bleeds to death
she whispers 
"this is what you did to me"

© 2011 capn_bribri

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Such a very sad poem and very deep. Keep writing :).

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love this. Its very deep and moving, Ive seen this situation a lot. Ive seen a friend take their own life. This is very touching to me...

Posted 13 Years Ago

Wow, very deep.
It's sad that stuff like this happens everyday, it's sad that people can be so cold and not care how they're
words hurt people.
And it's also sad that people actually do that to themselves, but I understand why.
Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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kent, WA

Im 17 and when im not shy im really hyper . I have 7 peircings my snake bites , tongue , both sides of my nose and gauges (: I live in washington and no not washington DC just plain old washington whe.. more..