it has started

it has started

A Poem by capn_bribri

she yells
we look away
i try to stay away
she gets mader
we just sit
she doesn't understand me
what i went though
what im going though
she doesn't care
i just sit there
thinking of things i would like to say
things are getting harder
they think im going to end up like her
so she wants to leave as soon as she can
she will take me with her
but little does she know
it already started

© 2010 capn_bribri

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very dramatic yet clean. well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

hm ... very nice poem, has a strong character!

Posted 12 Years Ago

I like the whole dramatic irony going on here, where we are in on what 'he' (i'm guessing) knows, but she doesn't. That was very unique in this piece. With an exception of some grammar errors, I believe that this is a fantastic piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on January 22, 2010
Last Updated on April 24, 2010



kent, WA

Im 17 and when im not shy im really hyper . I have 7 peircings my snake bites , tongue , both sides of my nose and gauges (: I live in washington and no not washington DC just plain old washington whe.. more..