wanting, waiting,but never getting

wanting, waiting,but never getting

A Poem by capn_bribri

wanting a answer he will never give
wait for the answer you hope he will give
but never getting it
i wish it wasn't over
but this is how it is
you never get what you want
not knowing if you will cry or hit something
so i got out in the 
cold 
wet
lonely
silent
woods
the pain of a newly broken heart
that just got fixed
and is now riped open again
in the darkness you cry
till the pain goes away
but it doesn't
it never does
waiting to see the light again
you go back to that ravor
dusty from months of know use
and cut away the pain 
of another broken heart 

© 2010 capn_bribri


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grate poem
There is so much emotion
within this poem
Amazing Job Well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


That was a powerful poem! It was emotional and so honest and true! I can definitely relate to this. Having a broken heart hurts so much and it's so hard to get over it once it happens. You expressed that very well in this poem! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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capn_bribri

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