she lives in hell

she lives in hell

A Poem by capn_bribri

she is born of the devil
she will not know love
only pain
lonleyness
darkness
and fear
she can not be saved
not even the most beautiful and
powerful angel can take her from this fate
she will stay here
in hell
with nothing but
the dream to be free

© 2010 capn_bribri


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the devil is her father...she hates him, but respects him. this really does make you think! XD nice poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


is hell really hell if someone feels at home there..? or would really hell for a person of darkness be to be in happy happy ponyland..anyhow it makes you think ..

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love this, excellent. reminds me of myself

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is amazing... i love it

Posted 9 Years Ago


A powerful poem. Strong statement and powerful words made poem a pleasure to read. No wasted words and to the point poetry writing. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love this one

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a frightening poem with powerful imagery.
Hopefully she will grow into a woman that finds the
strength free herself. Sometimes a parent can deny
a child to choose a life of their own. There is wisdom
in your work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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capn_bribri

kent, WA



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Im 17 and when im not shy im really hyper . I have 7 peircings my snake bites , tongue , both sides of my nose and gauges (: I live in washington and no not washington DC just plain old washington whe.. more..

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