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how much i care

how much i care

A Poem by capn_bribri

be a b***h 
like you always have

put me down
like you always will

call my fat
to make yourself feel better

say you care about me
but we all no its a lie

be a b***h
to show off for your friends

put me down
so they think your cool

call me fat
so they laugh and make fun

i will never say a thing and you know i wont
so be a b***h, put me down, call my fat, say you care about me
but i will never cry to show what you do
i will stay silent
thats how much i care for you 

© 2010 capn_bribri


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i will never say a thing and you know i wont
so be a b***h, put me down, call my fat, say you care about me
but i will never cry to show what you do"
~~~wow-this is a superbly beautiful piece of poetry~~~

:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


i kind of know how you feel. i went through alot of verbal abuse when i was younger and i just kept quiet....holding in all the anger and hate. Amazing Poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Someone call you fat. Time to find someone who will appreciate you. A powerful poem. Repetition of lines made your statement stronger. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love this one!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 14, 2010
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capn_bribri

kent, WA



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Im 17 and when im not shy im really hyper . I have 7 peircings my snake bites , tongue , both sides of my nose and gauges (: I live in washington and no not washington DC just plain old washington whe.. more..

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