Dancing in the rain

Dancing in the rain

A Poem by capn_bribri

Sitting in the middle of class with nothing to do but watch the rain fall .

You fall so lightly
On my skin
Wash away my sickness
Leaving me senseless 
Sun shining through
Such beautiful colors
Twirling in the streets
You make me feel complete

© 2012 capn_bribri

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I really like this. Short and sweet for sure.

Posted 10 Years Ago

this is good writing :) i sense a duality of words - love gently caressing your soul, leaving you feeling at one with life, at peace with the past. well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on March 19, 2012
Last Updated on March 19, 2012



kent, WA

Im 17 and when im not shy im really hyper . I have 7 peircings my snake bites , tongue , both sides of my nose and gauges (: I live in washington and no not washington DC just plain old washington whe.. more..