Let us walk free

Freedom is a thought track that cant quite be contorlled or created due to bands look at it how you will i wrote it as i saw fit

Let the pain drift away empty and unfelt.
Let the hours of endless agony melt like tender ice cubes
Let the screaming hearts once joined be parted
Let the years of waiting rewind and repair
Let errors for once and all be overlooked
Let them follow there dreams placed now within reach
Let them free from the chains to run down the street
Let them flow like the river , like the tides in the sea

Let them once and for all be free

Let them once and for all be without your politcal control

Let them once and for all run for the hills without fear of shooting

Let there be peace on earth

Let them and all that walk , walk hand in hand united

in freedom and equality

let us all be free

Reviews

[Taylor H]

Let them once and for all be without your politcal control----your political control

and this is a great poem. You really have an interesting, beautiful mind with some great thoughts. I cant see you NOT being a writer. Great Job.

[Dianah]

Your voice is really powerful in this poem. Sounds like a speech. Well done.


Dianah

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This is a wonderful write. Great Job

[Quiet Waters Rise]

I love the message here and I could feel the emotions in your writing. I absolutely agree with you and I think that it is truly beautiful

[Kyronn Shurriah]

itz true i like dat cappi and u might as well call ur poemz let hahaha. anywayz gd poem and bare letz watz up wiv dat????

[deeps]

Let there be peace on earth
Let them and all that walk , walk hand in hand united
in freedom and equality
let us all be free

I so loved these words here
This is such a wonderful write here
I like this alot. well written.