damaged goods like me?

damaged goods like me?

A Poem by captain
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very short........

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I’m too troubled

In the eyes of the crow

How dare me

Keeping a deep wound

                        Inside of me

Can you repair a damaged goods like me?

© 2016 captain


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a very deep inside piece... damaged goods..never...there is always hope

Posted 7 Years Ago


captain

7 Years Ago

thank you greatly ms. Ren, I'm keeping my hopes up.
Renée

7 Years Ago

my pleasure .. and might I add... always healing ( :
We can repair if we learn the cause.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


captain

7 Years Ago

thank you, i believed it now.
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
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Pax
i feel that way at times...or most of the time...but we live through it as a big challenge how to fix our ownselves....

Posted 7 Years Ago


captain

7 Years Ago

Thnk you
who would we ask for those kind of repairs? Good read captain. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


captain

7 Years Ago

I'm not really sure who or what, I can only say time will tell the difference in which to come. Than.. read more
Mark

7 Years Ago

We only have ourselves and our gift of choice captain. Namaste
captain

7 Years Ago

oh yes indeed, choices and its puzzling many choices again like it never ends, I guess have to wait .. read more

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