healing the insanity

just ramblings.

Trying to cope in healing the insanity

          I brought upon me, someday I'll be sane...

Someday I’ll be ok that the truth behind me

                                   Will just fade away…

I’m not who you think I am

I’m just a stranger in this farfetched world

I wish you’ll be gone Misery

      For I just want a peaceful life

Pretty normal in the eyes of everyone…

 

Reviews

[Joseph M. Shea]

Hi, This piece seems to me to be pergring in away. Insanity is a word that comes up in my work from time to time. One piece that come to mind it The Cure. It's post here and you are welcome to read it. I think I know how your feeling and even more what your thinking. All my relationships wore intents and the link with the people I loved very strong. For a time and time changes very thing. The strong be come weak and the weak strong. The blend is lost and you have to go find your self again.
I didn't worry about me when I was with her, She kept me grounded and in action. Then that eneded I had to redifine my self. I was very lost for a time. But I had my music and my writing to keep me going. I don't ask the big queston any more. No anser would satisfy me. I'm just here doing the best I can. Well you got me thinking and thats a good thing, Thanks, Take care, Joe

[captain]

I hear you sir, sometimes i find comfort in my poetry or i draw just to escape the crazy world i live in. I could say ART is a great escape. Keep doing what you do sire, and I'll keep mine too. Thank you very much in reading & reviewing my poem.

[Joseph M. Shea]

I was at one time trying to change my self and be some one elts. But in the end there I was and I have to be who I'am. Some I loved, called me a bleeding heart, others saw me as sad. But the richness I found in those feeling, I wouldn't trade for anything. So I guest I'm stuck being a broken hearted man, For now any ways. We'll see what the next chaper brings. Take care, Joe

[captain]

Even though I tried to pretend, I still see myself in the end. No matter what I do – pretending is not really the solution, our close friends and family knows that. I try to be more perceptive – then look for a positive outlook to keep up from the hard life. I like what you said, we experienced sad things but we always do look forward for the next daily chapter our lives. Thank you very much sir, your feedback i really appreciate that :)

[Joseph M. Shea]

That's very cool captain. I like to reach people and have them reach me. It opens my mind and out look on things. For me it's all about passion. Love starts with one self and then to others, Take care, Joe

[Nisreen]

Only a wise man seeks peace
and says everything else can come when it comes ......
i like this poem

[captain]

Thank you.

[Kasey Miriam]

This piece is fast paced and thought provoking. We are all insane in some way and it can be hard to cope with at times. Thank you for sharing.

[captain]

Thank you, Kasey...

[Katreya]

'someday I'll be sane' I often wonder if any of us are! I think I understand the emotions being conveyed here, and where you're coming from, though - most people will, because no one gets to gloss through life unhindered. A nice piece, all in all, and it is what poetry is for - self expression. :)

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[captain]

Thank you Kat, I am glad you find t nice.

[abluehorseandflowers]

Hi captain,
You present the struggle to heal much more simply than I, Thank you.

[captain]

thank you sir, I am glad you think so... but i guess it really depends on us and our choices...

[Lily Mae]

Wanting to look normal to the world while seeking out what is normal is a difficult journey. I guess it's about loving the whole of who you are...xo

[captain]

I am in a process in doing that, its like an everyday battle to me. Thank you so much for this visit and review Lily, I really appreciate it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we make our own insanity, and we unmake our own insanity...

we all strive for a peaceful life.

yes...

[captain]

Thank you sir Jacob, indeed true.

[Tim Piotrowicz]

an impossible hope, the way that you are

[captain]

Thank you very much Tim, I really do appreciate your review.

[I Am Svetlana]

We all wish to be sane, sadly not a lot of people are. Hell, I'm not even as sane as I wish to be! And I'll admit that. We all live our lives a different way, some lighter than others. We all have our dark days, but we all should just keep our chins up and hope for the best. Giving up would just mean we haven't tried our hardest nor had the opportunity to be the best that we can be.

[captain]

Thank you for the great encouragement Svetlana, I will do keep trying, and do keep on the best I can do to survive the insane world we live in.

[I Am Svetlana]

Just take it a day at a time. You'll get there eventually :)

[Coyote Poetry]

All of us are seeking the desire in the poem. It seem the madness of life had surrounded us. I like the honest and direct feel of the poem. I don't know what normal is? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[captain]

Thank you so much Sir Coyote, its an honor to have you read my piece. I don't even recognize normal anymore, perhaps I really don't know what is normal is either. I appreciate this review very much.